I wrote my first review on this site

[Xbox Live Man]

Yeah my first review was on Gears Of War, can people check it out & tell me what I can improve & stuff, you know, critique? Thanks :)

[GamerSince'76]

Good reviews. Personally I would leave out words like "retarded". It's more professional looking without using slang but one of the most important things is being involved in a site and active in the forums. You are doing that so I think it's great.

[Nato King-XBA]

I took some time out of my busy life to read your review and I must say not bad but I would have been nice to hear what you have to say about the Sound and your suggestions to make the game better or what you would like to see improved on.

But other than that not bad.

[Xbox Live Man]

On Gears, I actually have nothing to add on the sound & my need for improvements, I believed to be clearly stated during the review, I guess not :P